Definite improvement from the home kit, the black and red design on the front is quite interesting and different, the collar looks a lot better than the home design also.Maybe ...

It's average, I think the green colours would look better reversed, the band is a good idea though and the sponsor looks a lot better in this style than the ...

I think your presentation is just great, but your drawing technique lets you down a little bit in the kit itself, try and make the shapes a bit more realistic ...

Seen these templates used thousands of times before. This really isn't great having a red logo and a blue trim, just resembles Barca too much.

Yeah, I drew most of this hastily a couple of months ago. I'm getting to grips with a graphics tablet now, hopefully that'll improve it.

this one is better than the other home-design.great job!

I actually really like this design, and I agree that it does work a lot better than the other home shirt.

I think this is a great start, love the thistle idea, the colour scheme is also nice and gives a unique look, not too sure Clydesdale Bank would be too ...

I wouldn't call it an improvement, as I think the current logo for the Greek league is great, it's a nice idea, but maybe a little too plain.

Really quite dull and the Corgon logo isn't great quality either, it's a brilliant beer btw!

It's really quite nice I just think it needs something more added too it, just not sure what, maybe make the fonts and shapes a little more interesting and not ...

I just thought, without the band it could be a logo for the Moldovan FA or national team

I'-) probably this has actually gone backwards on all fronts except the ball design on the crown, that looks a lit better now.Good of you to work on criticism received ...

Much better than the real life logo for me, great work here,

Quite simple but works well especially with the Macedonian national colours which are really distinctive too. Font is great also and fits perfectly here.